Rimworld Trailer - Preview

Started by Subzerosz, September 17, 2014, 05:40:28 PM

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Subzerosz

hello @ all

important >>>>>> im not here to get subscribers !!!!
edit: i dont monetize my videos

i made a trailer - preview video on youtube. im new and totaly noob at this...
you guys know the game and can say me what do you think.
dont be to strong with me, i never used a video editor befor  :)

thank you!


https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=62kvZ6pbNT4&list=UUxlVg_4dDWBRabYLS5GQk8w

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Subzerosz

okay thanks but what can i do better next time? bad and good scenes?

Shinzy

Quote from: Subzerosz on September 20, 2014, 06:26:11 AM
okay thanks but what can i do better next time? bad and good scenes?

same but with more.. explosions? =P that's what all the sequels do! hehe

That was more an introduction/tutorial than a trailer with all the long explanations between every 'scene'

try to fit your texts in one line and then show the process of how it's done
"Recruit new members"
cut to the part where Colonist.X recruits the prisoner.YMCA

and keep the texts as short as possible =P "Start to build your colony" -> "Build your colony"

Just pretend people don't like to read and you'll be golden =P


Subzerosz