The Winter...

Started by Fruit loops, September 03, 2015, 07:47:58 PM

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Fruit loops

My notes: to start sorry for being inactive on the forums lately, been addicted to Counter strike. Although I don't post much I check every day. I always try out each alpha, Starting at alpha 4 I haven't missed a single one. anyways this take a bit from my old story 'help I'm being kidnapped!' don't expect the best of grammar, Capitals, periods, etc aren't my strong points, Sad being a freshman, and not being as good at those compared to others, anyways ENJOY!  :D

PS <3 litlbear



I tried to go to sleep that night.. It just... just didn't feel right.. I tried. I did what I could, I mean I couldn't just follow him out there.. I knew he was dead.. oh I knew.. I didn't feel like joining him up there yet. not yet.

Me being the only one to see the 'creatures' you and the others, I must assume.. Believe I did It.
I stared into her eyes to see if she thought I did it.. my depression only deepened..

8 days earlier

As I woke up this morning I felt like it would be a great day. As I stumbled out of bed to my sink, I heard my roommate say, 'good morning' In a bit of a sarcastic voice. When I heard this voice, I thought 'it sure will be a good day' grinning to myself. Jacob, you ready for some hiking? he jokingly said 'of course' as he swung his arm in a over excited manner. we set out a little over 30 minutes later, on my way to the gates I said bye to Beth, my girlfriend, she exclaimed oh hey there, 'I assume you'll be willing to help me tonight, with the flowers, right?' I smiled saying 'of course' and continued walking to the shed where Jacob was waiting. he grinned at me as he handed me my hiking gear and my backpack. when we were a good say.. 30 meters out Jacob said 'you know I enjoy the scavenging job, and you make it better, but really whats the point in our job? we have hydroponics, we mine for metals and stone, and we have have animals for clothing. I mean really what else do we need, that we can get out here?' I nodded and said, 'Well we don't get to choose and the other 200 colonists don't either'. and with that most of the walk was silent. we felt a sudden chill in the air and snow started falling, funny I said, 'Its only September, didn't expect it this early'. Jacob said, 'we should probably head back, were not equipped for this weather'. I agreed and we wen't on the long hike back. about a quarter of the way threw, I heard a noise.. a noise I didn't recognize, I looked around and kept on going about three fourths of the way there, I heard the noise again, I didn't really care, I kept going, but I did care when, I heard screaming next me and a sharp object go threw Jacob. when this happened I screamed as well, covered in blood I stumbled back only to see him get dragged away, I mean in seconds. He was out of sight in a good 4 seconds. me sitting there in shock Started sprinting as fast as I could towards the colony, when reached the gates the guard let me in he asked 'what the hell happened? wheres your partner?' I scurried in side to fall back and realize what just happened. The guard yelled for a medic, and before I knew what happened I was in a medical bed, turns out I was put to sleep with a medicine before I was dragged the the med bay. I awoke to Beth, my good friend Chris the cook, and Kevin my friend who specialized in animal taming.

Once I had woken up fully the colony leader, Addison started questioning me about the incident I told him what I knew and he stood there In confusion, he told the nurse something I couldn't hear and faced back towards me and said 'Theirs only one problem with that. there are no animals for a good 200 kilometers. we went on a mass hunt a while back and set up a fence so no other could get in. I know your a good guy and all, but I think you need a better 'story' than that' and as he said that a couple guards walked in with a look of disgust on their face. and escorted me to a cell. I thought it was crazy, everyone knew I was a good guy, I would never do something of the the nature of the accusation. looking from the cell I looked out the window near the prison entrance seeing a large storm approaching.

I have yet to understand why they immediately thought I did it, why they thought I would become that kind of person, in a day, why it would go from trusting me to looking at me in disgust, in a day.

I was best friends with Jacob, why would they think I could do This act.. this horrible act. it is beyond me

Back to the present.

They have kept me in this cell for 8 days, bringing me food, and the necessity's I have been talking to this woman trying to convince her of my innocence yet they have an incredible bias regarding me.

What ever they think I did that would make the them so haste to suspect me I have yet to know.

Hope you enjoyed, part two will come out once I get the chance. The only reason I enjoy making these stories is because of your responses/comments so respond/comment thanks  :D :) : ;) :P
The guy who suggested the mood debuff for harvesting prisoner organs.

Lady Wolf

A good beginning and fun read, I'm looking forward to seeing more, and don't worry too much about the grammar, writing is the best way to get better at it after all.  8)

FridayBiology

Yes another god damn youtuber.
 https://www.youtube.com/user/FridayBiology

RoboticManiac

Berserk colonist? Scyther ambush? Spell it out for me.

litlbear

yes