Hey guys, possibility of feedback on My new YouTube RimWorld series

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Hey guys I have just uploaded my first episode of my lets play series of Rim World and would really appreciate if anyone is willing to take some time to give me a bit of feedback on the episode ?
I appreciate the time you give me.

link: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lMViznf_epI

Thanks for your time guys !