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Title: Exodus, Flight from the White Forest
Post by: JackWearskin on October 28, 2017, 03:13:24 PM
Lord Knight and his trusted aides have been banished from the White Forest. Lord Knight was involved in an intriguing scheme which backfired. He and five of his most loyal aides are now running for their lives.

Chief Hakuja of the Black Clam Guna has put a price on Knight's head along with a hefty fine for anyone aiding him. Knight and his servants have fled to the edge of the huge desert region of Blackturkey Wastes on the Planet Ras Alchiba.

Knight has been offered refuge in the Bigfoot Forest towards the North; however, this Promised Land lies on the other side of the barren Wasteland.

Follow them: https://imgur.com/a/tsiTG (https://imgur.com/a/tsiTG)
Title: Re: Exodus, Flight from the White Forest
Post by: crazyroosterman on October 28, 2017, 06:51:49 PM
this is great (:
Title: Re: Exodus, Flight from the White Forest
Post by: Slimy_Slider on October 28, 2017, 09:22:35 PM
Keep going please. This is gold.  ;D
Title: Re: Exodus, Flight from the White Forest
Post by: JackWearskin on October 29, 2017, 11:05:32 AM
Thanks for the feedback.  Exodus 2 is a work in progress...
Title: Re: Exodus, Flight from the White Forest
Post by: crazyroosterman on October 29, 2017, 01:59:19 PM
when you say exodus 2 do you mean a separate journey altogether or simply the continuation of lord knight and(what's left of) his servants?.
and np its always sick to see people using the world mechanic to story tell.
Title: Re: Exodus, Flight from the White Forest
Post by: JackWearskin on October 29, 2017, 03:39:00 PM
Quote from: crazyroosterman on October 29, 2017, 01:59:19 PM
when you say exodus 2 do you mean a separate journey altogether or simply the continuation of lord knight and(what's left of) his servants?.

They are continuing where they left off.

Quote from: crazyroosterman on October 29, 2017, 01:59:19 PM
and np its always sick to see people using the world mechanic to story tell.

I donT understand the problem here?  Please elaborate, what exactly is "sick"?
Title: Re: Exodus, Flight from the White Forest
Post by: Slimy_Slider on October 29, 2017, 07:38:43 PM
I would assume he means 'sick' as in slang for cool, great, good. Your story is great man.
Title: Re: Exodus, Flight from the White Forest
Post by: JackWearskin on October 30, 2017, 02:56:36 AM
Quote from: Slimy_Slider on October 29, 2017, 07:38:43 PM
'sick' as in slang for cool

I am getting old. I missed that.
Title: Re: Exodus, Flight from the White Forest
Post by: Nameless on November 02, 2017, 01:38:42 PM
The work schedule part made me laughed.