Hey Rooki1 Great work!
Also I don't know if it was intentoinal but the Peacekeeper Storyteller description doesn't read right to me at least
"The rogue Federation Peacekeeper Corps commander, Sereniz have a mountain of painful stories because of her former jobs nature. In her story, characters usually faced their doom after writhe in the agony of endless pain. She loves these kinds of stories."
Might be better as:
"As a rogue Federation Peacekeeper Corps commander, Sereniz has a mountain of painful stories because of her former jobs nature. In her story, characters usually faced their doom after writhing in an agony of endless pain. She loves these kinds of stories."
Also I don't know if it was intentoinal but the Peacekeeper Storyteller description doesn't read right to me at least
"The rogue Federation Peacekeeper Corps commander, Sereniz have a mountain of painful stories because of her former jobs nature. In her story, characters usually faced their doom after writhe in the agony of endless pain. She loves these kinds of stories."
Might be better as:
"As a rogue Federation Peacekeeper Corps commander, Sereniz has a mountain of painful stories because of her former jobs nature. In her story, characters usually faced their doom after writhing in an agony of endless pain. She loves these kinds of stories."