I found some grammar/spelling mistakes, listed below:
- Character creating screen
Trait "carefuly", should be "careful"
ManualDumb, ManualSkilled <- unknown what it means.
Confused is not really a trait, but more a state of mind. Better use "confusing" or "shortminded"
business acumen is a rather difficult word. Is it better to use "leadership"?
I have never heard of "vat-grown". Did you mean "vegetarian"?
- Character creating screen
Trait "carefuly", should be "careful"
ManualDumb, ManualSkilled <- unknown what it means.
Confused is not really a trait, but more a state of mind. Better use "confusing" or "shortminded"
business acumen is a rather difficult word. Is it better to use "leadership"?
I have never heard of "vat-grown". Did you mean "vegetarian"?