Recruitment Failed

[eastwood6510]

Great story!

[A.J]

What a read. So funny and well written! Great job!!

[KC]

Excellent story. Perhaps you should be an author. The quality of this writing and plot is good enough for publishing.

[Enjoyment]

Wow! Really good story. I was imaging Jim Raynor from SC II telling it to me, and it fits perfectly...

[Segrog]

Wow, this is amazing.

[ComradeKhan]

I like the 2% chance. It means that there is a chance, however slim, that he might change his mind about "the whole colony thing" and join them anyway.

Once you're in the Rimworlds, there's no getting out.

[Coenmcj]

Kel may of put her all into that ship, but by the sounds of it that AI *totally* didn't know what it was doing.

Definitely a good story, hope to see more of your work!
How did I miss this for about a month?..

[kahlzun]

Nice. Wow.

[Alitaria]

Holy sweet Jesus mate, you got some talent for writing there.
That is the most interesting and saddening take on the failed recruitment I have ever heard.
Well done.