Writing a story

Started by Herc18, September 05, 2015, 11:46:01 PM

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Herc18

Hey everyone, I'm writing a fantasy story and trying to find some beta readers, just looking for critiques, feedback and general thoughts on it so far, it's not super long so if anyone is interested in what I hope is a good read please comment or PM me :) it's along the lines of game of thrones for a rough idea!

Thanks everyone!
What has been, will be again.

Elsvaer

I'm in!

What type of fantasy, may I ask?
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Herc18

I would say its a lot like game of thrones with the characters and different factions, But the creatures are much more fantasy based, We have about 120 pages complete if you'd like to beta read. I can send you the google docs if you would like to be able to comment and add suggestions to the story (Which requires an email Address) or I can can just PM you chapters if you just want to read and give your overall thoughts? Both help :)
What has been, will be again.

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Simon_The_Space_Engineer

What's the word count? Also I am writing a book as well
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Fruit loops

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BetaSpectre

Shrugs, I might look at it, or I might not.
If I do I'll be sure to send feedback.
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LouisTBR

Yeah, I may as well give it a go.
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MindFruitNinja

You can find beta readers on FanFiction.net - theoretically. I've still never got an answer from those who I've PM'd.
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Korben Dallas

I just made a thread about this but do you use a writing program for making stories and what is it if you do?