Journey's End - Commentary

[BeastNips]

This is the commentary thread for Journey's End, the latest chapter in my fan fiction. I've decide to name the series Angel's Wing after the 1st chapter (keen Sci-Fi game fans will realise I've stolen the name of the ship and the AI from another game #sorrynotsorry). Please feel free to leave feedback and discuss the story in this thread.

[BeastNips]

Sorry it's been so long! The latest installment is up. Enjoy!

[BeastNips]

And another.

[milon]

I just watched a Star Trek TNG episode last night called Journey's End.

Love your story telling!

[BeastNips]

Thanks mate! I was initially having a little trouble with where this chapter was going to go but I think I've figured it out. I should have the next installment up soon.

[BeastNips]

Next couple are up. Enjoy!

[ArguedPiano]

Entertaining as always. Thanks BeastNips

[BeastNips]

Thanks man, glad people are enjoying it.

[Barazen]

Haha i dunno how, but you made the chaos feel readable and make sense. Bravo my nippies, bravo.

[BeastNips]

Haha i dunno how, but you made the chaos feel readable and make sense. Bravo my nippies, bravo.

Thanks man. Sorry there hasn't been an instalment in a while, I've had a bereavement recently and haven't felt like writing. I will get back to it though!

[ArguedPiano]

I actually had to look up bereavement, and if you mean it literally, I hope you are doing OK.

[BeastNips]

I actually had to look up bereavement, and if you mean it literally, I hope you are doing OK.

Yes, literally I'm afraid. I'm doing OK, I just haven't been been massively into writing at the moment. I have some time off work this week so hopefully I'll get something written!

[BeastNips]

New one is up!

[wafflep90]

Great story Dude keep it up, and sorry for your loss