Exodus, Flight from the White Forest

[JackWearskin]

Lord Knight and his trusted aides have been banished from the White Forest. Lord Knight was involved in an intriguing scheme which backfired. He and five of his most loyal aides are now running for their lives.

Chief Hakuja of the Black Clam Guna has put a price on Knight's head along with a hefty fine for anyone aiding him. Knight and his servants have fled to the edge of the huge desert region of Blackturkey Wastes on the Planet Ras Alchiba.

Knight has been offered refuge in the Bigfoot Forest towards the North; however, this Promised Land lies on the other side of the barren Wasteland.

Follow them: https://imgur.com/a/tsiTG

[crazyroosterman]

this is great (:

[Slimy_Slider]

Keep going please. This is gold. 

[JackWearskin]

Thanks for the feedback.  Exodus 2 is a work in progress...

[crazyroosterman]

when you say exodus 2 do you mean a separate journey altogether or simply the continuation of lord knight and(what's left of) his servants?.
and np its always sick to see people using the world mechanic to story tell.

[JackWearskin]

when you say exodus 2 do you mean a separate journey altogether or simply the continuation of lord knight and(what's left of) his servants?.

They are continuing where they left off.

and np its always sick to see people using the world mechanic to story tell.

I donT understand the problem here?  Please elaborate, what exactly is "sick"?

[Slimy_Slider]

I would assume he means 'sick' as in slang for cool, great, good. Your story is great man.

[JackWearskin]

'sick' as in slang for cool

I am getting old. I missed that.

[Nameless]

The work schedule part made me laughed.