Space Opera Plots

[JimmyAgnt007]

so ive decided to post my writing for free and just use patron for donations rather than put stuff behind a paywall.  the writing is at jimmyagent007.wordpress.com

I didnt feel right with the space opera story so im not posting it.  gonna change stuff, see what feels right.  the first two stories have both chapters up though.

my problem with the space opera is that I felt like the first chapter 'forced' the gathering of the crew and that always bugs me. its better than my previous attempts but still not right.  I prefer a more natural intro to the characters so im going to see how to do things that way.

my other issue is the traveling ship doing jobs, seems a bit cliche and im trying to avoid that.  other things like bounty hunting feel just as common so im still in limbo.  I will figure it out eventually, in the mean time I am going to run with other stories.