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mrseeker

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Spelling/grammar bugs & improvements 0.0.250
« on: November 04, 2013, 03:39:33 PM »

I found some grammar/spelling mistakes, listed below:

- Character creating screen
Trait "carefuly", should be "careful"
ManualDumb, ManualSkilled <- unknown what it means.
Confused is not really a trait, but more a state of mind. Better use "confusing" or "shortminded"
business acumen is a rather difficult word. Is it better to use "leadership"?
I have never heard of "vat-grown". Did you mean "vegetarian"?
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Re: Spelling/grammar bugs & improvements 0.0.250
« Reply #1 on: November 04, 2013, 04:00:27 PM »

Thanks for the typo warning.

Please stick to bugs in this forum, though. Not suggestions.
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Re: Spelling/grammar bugs & improvements 0.0.250
« Reply #2 on: November 04, 2013, 04:01:41 PM »

Carefuly -> Careful - Noted

ManualDumb, ManualSkilled means they are unable to do simple things like hauling cleaning, and more skilled like building and growing - Will be addressed most likely post alpha

Confused ->  to someother word maybe - Noted

Business acumen -> leadership is different things. Entrepreneurial might be a more worthy or business savvy

vat-grown means they were a test tube baby grown in a vat to be perfect.

I will write the ones noted into the bug report
« Last Edit: November 06, 2013, 07:39:31 AM by enystrom8734 »
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Re: Spelling/grammar bugs & improvements 0.0.250
« Reply #3 on: November 06, 2013, 03:36:39 AM »

Carefuly -> Carefull - Noted
It's as mrseeker wrote, though, with only one "l": careful.
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Re: Spelling/grammar bugs & improvements 0.0.250
« Reply #4 on: November 06, 2013, 07:39:24 AM »

Woops typo! I just said it was noted that it should be changed :P
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