Help im being kidnapped! 1000+ veiws!!! + Finale!!

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im going to give credit to a person I forget his name and I couldent find his post for my life but you will recognize it (not copied at all btw, just a bit of inspiration)


pirate leader: ok guys lets move from the right there is a hole in the wall
me: shouldn't we check for mines?
pirate leader: I don't think this place has the technology for th** BOOM
pirate: ahhh my arm!
different pirate: TAKE COVER!    im hit MEDIC 
me: ahhh im hit help
me: you idiots don't leave me!!! please!
pirate leader: Fall back!!! 
another random pirate: What about zane!!
pirate leader: leave him he cant make it theres no chance
anther random pirate: we cant just leave him!
me: YEAH listen to him!!!
a noise: ssssshhhhhHHHH
pirate leader: what th* BOOM
another random pirate: MORTARS FALL BACK!
15 minutes later
me: HELP anyone!
me: is anyone out there!?!?
colonist: hey theres one alive over here
other colonist: damn how did he make threw all that
colonist: what should we do we already have like 50 people we can barely make enough food for the ones we have now
other colonist: well we cant leave him maybe just nurse him to health then sell him?
colonist: can you talk?
me: yeah? im gonna bleed out in like 5 minutes but I can talk
colonist: ok grab him kevin
kevin: ok I don't know why you cant
colonist: because I was a noble I never had to haul a thing in my life and im not starting now HA
me: day one: when I was being carried to my cell I noticed we stood no chance capturing this place there is twice as many of them than us I feel like nothing can bring this place down even those horrid mechanoids that killed my family (had to add a back story lol) it turns out the colonist that was talking to kevin was droid so I guess I know them pretty well I guess I know their names at least
colonist leader: what should we do with him we haven't seen a slave trader in 7 months at least by then we could all be dead from starvation remember john how he fell down a steam geyser he died of starvation hes in the kitchen pantry
chloe: wha... wh... WHAT
colonist leader: ok umm... chloe I need you to go convince him to join us or at least try until a slave trader comes by
chloe: ok ill try
me: day 2: for the third time this hour somebody came in and gave me the angriest look I don't know what I did?
chloe: what do I say?
colonist leader: just persuade him to join us
chloe: I make no promises
chloe: hello
me: hi so...
chloe: do you want to join our colony
colonist leader: -_- ..... facepalm
me: ..... you killed my entire crew and you gave no mercy to them what so ever do you expect me to just join you .... the rest of my crew will come back and break me out I know it
chloe: ok heres your food ill be back later to talk again 
me: day 34: im sorry I couldent write they confiscated my book and they didn't give me it until now so... yeah ive been convinced over 70 times I don't understand how.. how they know they killed my second family and don't under stand it I think when chloe come back tonight ill say yes im to tired to fight im sick of this cell and eating nutrient paste everybody else gets muffalo potatoes and berries
chloe: ok try 74 ill try like the rest of the times hes gotta break soon he will be a good addition to the colony
chloe: hi again heres your nutrient paste
me: I think ill join you guys
chloe: you... you ARE thank the heavens you have been in here for so long you are?!
me: yeah why not
colonist leader: ok weekly meeting I would like to introduce are newest addition Zane
*everyone claps hands*
in other news we will be switching to nutrient paste instead of simple meals to solve the food crisis
*oh come on* *......* *WHHHHHY*
ok every one back to work meet back here next week at 7 pm
me: ....WOW the main reason I agreed to it was so I didn't have to eat that
me: what time is it?
roommate: like 5 in the morning uuuuh why did you wake me up
me: I dont know its just I hear something outside
roommate: what what do you hear out side?
me: it sounds like foot steps
roommate: human or animal
me: OH CRAP MECHS!
roommate: Sound the alarm!
me: get your gun! I set the alarm off
roommate: get behind something!
noise: pounding on the door* BREAKS OPEN*
me: SHOOT SHOOT SHOOT
roommate: that thing has a minigun!!
noise: something being thrown DINK dink dink beep beep beep BEEP BEEP BOOM
me: Crap! grenade BOOM whyyy man whyyy
me: I should look out the window oh crap they are swarming the main building
roommate: help...
me: omg man your ok
* rushes over to him
me: ill get help
roommate: BEHIND YOU!
me: what?
*turns head slowly
me: oh shit...
to be continued........

(cracks knuckles, lets get this baby started)

*turns head slowly
me: oh shit...
*jumps behind bed
Mechanoid: Raaaah
*fires minigun
me: NOOOOO CHRIS!!
roommate (Chris) : ru... run man leav... leave m...... *dies*
Me: *deep breathing* ok... le*
Mechonoid: *snorts* starts walking off*
Me: *holds breath and go still*
*shooting
Chloe: FIRE!!!
Mechonoid: RAAAAHHH *fires minigun*
Chloe: Take cover!!!
colonist: ahhhh im hit
same colonist: *incapacitated* HELP HELP HELP
sycther: rahhhh *takes shot*
Still the same colonist: Cmon HELP plea.... *gets shot by sycther* uhhh he... help.. *dies
me: oh crap.. the sycthers are here to??
chloe: take it down!!
*BANG BANG BANG
Mechonoid: rhhh *short circuts* BOOOM
Chloe: OVER HERE we got a man down
Colonist: we got the north side locked down the south is getting over run we need help over there
Chloe: ok guys hurry it up *looks in side room anyone in here
Me:  help me my arm is torn off
Chloe: ZANE! you made, it over here get him *colonist picks me up*
Me: thanks ma... *turns head slowly*
Inferno blast hits*
gets knocked out*

TWO WEEKS LATER

*wakes up doesn't open eyes*
Voice: he has been out for two weeks
Voice: I know but we cant give up on him
*blinks rapidly
Voice: oh damn he's waking up
Voice: hey there buddy
Me: Huh?
colonist: you have been out for two weeks
Me: WHAT??!!
Colonist: hey! calm down!!
Me: ok... ok
Me: how are Chloe and Kevin?
Colonist... umm.. Chloe?... oh her she has been in bed for weeks she lost her leg she cant walk anymore
Me... *gets wide eyes*
Colonist: don't worry she can still talk and things she just cant do anything that requires her to get out of bed
Other colonist: oh your Zane she has been worried sick about you
Me: can I see her?
colonist: can  you walk?
Me: umm.. yeah? just my arm that's gone
Me *limps down hallway*
*opens door*
Me: Chloe?
Chloe: *turns head rapidly ZANE! I haven't seen you in so long how have you been?
Me: Idk I have been asleep
Chloe: oh...
Chloe: you wanna jump in with me?
Me: sure *smiles and sighs with relief*

TWO MONTHS LATER

Me: ok Chloe it has been almost two months me and Kevin think that you have had enough therapy lets try to walk a foot  if it hurts to much let me know and ill grab you but try your hardest
Chloe: ok *takes deep breath*
walks*
Kevin: Good job! try to make it to the door and back
Me: great job and yeah try that
Chloe: ok ill try

* over the course of two weeks Chloe has walked a bit further and bit further to where she is almost able to walk flawlessly with her crutches

TWO WEEKS LATER

Chloe: lets go out for a walk Zane?
Me: ok
*walks about half a mile from base*
Me: look at these deer their so majestic
Chloe: majestic? never heard you use those words before but yeah they are very pretty
Me: want to pet one?
Chloe: sure
Me: *go's to pet one
deer walks away*
Me:... really
Chloe:  ahh good times *sighs*
Deer slowly turns  head*
Eyes go red*
Me: hey Ch... What the hell..
Chloe: huh? what Za... oh god...

To be continued.....

I updated this again cause of a three day weekend

Me: hey Ch... What the hell..
Chloe: Huh? what Za... oh god...
Me: run Chloe I take care of it
Chloe: ok just hurry
Deer: *scrapes hoofs
Me: *walks backwards away from deer with gun still aimed at it
Deer: nahh *starts charging
Me: oh crap
*BANG
Me: thank god *sighs
Chloe: I hope he is alright..
Me: I better get going
Colonist: hey Chloe nice to see you up moving, but umm where is Zane?
Chloe: he should be back in a couple minutes, he had to take care of a mad deer
colonist: ok that's fine
Chloe: stands by gates*
Me: What's that? *turns head
*starts running as fast as fast as possible
Chloe: Zane! are you ok why were you runi**
Me: CLOSE THE GATE!
Chloe: What??
Me: DO IT NOW!!
Colonist: WHY!
Me: rushes over and closes it*
Me: .. seriously we could have all just died
Colonist: Well we are SOO sorry..
different colonist: yeah man for all we know it could have been a mad squirrel or something
*walks off
Me: Chloe, go tell the leader to get ready for a attack that you wouldn't expect
Chloe: ok..
Me: Hurry! ill get Kevin
*both run off
Me: KEVIN! wake up!
Kevin: huh.. wha.... uhhh
Me: Hurry!
Kevin: ok ok jesus
*alarm goes off
Kevin: god, whats happening
Me: you'll see
Walks out side*
Colonist leader: What, what is it Zane??
Me: Every animal out there has gone mad *points at gate
Me: see the bunch of animals out there they don't want food they want us to die
Colonist leader: oh.. well until the animals have starved you are not to leave the premises
Colonist: ok
different colonist: fine..
*mumbles among the crowd
Colonist leader: your all dismissed, carry on
Eclipse begins*
Me: oh crap..
Chloe: what?
Me: our crops wont grow in the eclipse and we still aren't that stable on food
Chloe: oh..
Me: I think it will be ok.. I hope
*all go's to bed
Me: cya in the morning
Me: hey Kevin
Kevin: What? starts taking off pants*
Me: do you think that we will be ok?
Kevin: yeah.. and by the way I can top bunk
Me: I guess.. I thought it was my night
Kevin: For all you know you slept top last night...
* go's to sleep
*beep beep beep
Me: Yawnnn *turns off alarm
*hears colonist leader yelling OH NO
Me: uhh what was that, lets go Kevin
Me: what happened?
Colonist leader: a couple Boomrats got in last night they blew up most of our food supply..
Me: WHAT! how much longer can we hold out??
Colonist leader: 2 days at most....



Me: WHAT! how much longer can we hold out??
Colonist leader: 2 days at most....
Me: ok lets ration are supply
Colonist leader: we are gonna have to
Kevin: ok we have around 40 colonist, there is about 200 animals we are pretty screwed
Colonist leader: everyone to bed
random colonist: its only 7 and we haven't even eaten yet
Colonist leader: yes, I know but we have to rest up for tomorrow
*next morning
Colonist leader: everybody gather all the metal in the court yard
*heavy sighs from every one
Colonist leader: Chop chop get to it 
Me: chloe, what do you think we are going to do?
Chloe: I don't know but we cant go on like this for much longer
Kevin: *walks over interrupting* So any of you think what im thinking
Me: huh?
chloe: what? go on
Kevin: I think we are going to get off this rock
Me: oh, we have been here so long I didn't think we could
Kevin: we couldn't all make it then, and we still cant but I think the leader thinks most of us are going to starve
Chloe: well us three are going to make it we have been through a lot and we can make it through this
Me: I second that
Kevin: Yeah! we can do this
*couple hours later*
Me: ugggg Im Sooooo tired
Kevin: I know right
Chloe: well that's the last of it at least we are done for today
*2 days later*
Chloe: we cant, we just cant
Me: we have to
Kevin: *pukes*
Me: you ok
kevin: yeah,*coughs up some more* im good
colonist leader: we lost 4 more today that makes a total of 17 colonists left
Random colonist: well we got the ship mostly done
*banging in the backround*
Colonist leader: hurry build the A.I. core
Colonist constructer: im on it
colonist leader: everybody to your battle stations the wall is not gonna hold for much longer!
Me: hurry chloe!
*louder banging*
colonist leader: At ready!
Chloe: this is it!
Kevin: see you guys on the other side!
Me: if I see you guys again we gonna have a MAJOR party
*even louder banging*
Chloe: Good luck!
*breaks down*
colonist leader: Fire!!!!
rahhh* nnhnnhh* sqeak*
Colonist constructer: its ready!
colonist leader: FALL BACK!
*colonist constructor has a squrriel jump on his face!
Colonist constructor: AGGG HELP!
Chloe: see you when we land!
kevin: I love you guys I hope to see you again!
Me: *sniffles*good luck
*BLAST OFF*



Thank you for reading "help im being kidnaped"
keep your eyes on the story page for my new story where we land on a glitter world and have a new life there thanks for the ongoing support especially litbear (might have spelled wrong) if not for him I would not have updated this story and again thanks

[litlbear]

yes

[theapolaustic1]

well man that was
certainly something

i'll say that

[litlbear]

well man that was
certainly something

i'll say that

yes

[litlbear]

bump

[Bodog999]

[litlbear]

we need part 2

[Fruit loops]

lol nobody read this for like 2 weeks now you read it So what the heck part two will be out tomorrow

[litlbear]

hooray

[Fruit loops]

Couldn't do it today sorry

[litlbear]

its ok please try its really quality

[Krantz86]

colonist: ok grab him kevin
kevin: ok I don't know why you cant
colonist: because I was a noble I never had to haul a thing in my life and im not starting now

best part

[litlbear]

cmoon fruit loops!

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it has been updated Enjoy   

[litlbear]

what a great 2nd part, hopefully you can update again soon!