Character Draft - Kieth Nevin "Nev"

[Chozo Nomad]

As per the title, this here is my first draft of my character.

Character- Kieth Nevin "Nev"

Childhood:Marbled Midworld
Born into an aristocratic family, Nev spent part of his younger years in youthful ignorance. His studies were sporadic and he never took a liking to anything involving his hands. Fate, however, would force a change in habit. A global war broke out and the nukes fell until the planet's surface was reduced to radioactive glass.

    Construction - 0
    Growing - *Disabled*
    Research - *Disabled*
    Mining - *Disabled*
    Shooting - 0
    Melee - 0
    Social - +2 (Aristocrats are good at manipulating people, right?)
    Cooking - + 2
    Medicine - 0
    Artistic - 0
    Crafting - 0

Adulthood:Wasteland Ruffian

Survival was a day to day struggle. Food usually came in the form of horribly mutated animals and water in the form of condensate. Nev became incredibly resourceful as a result. A surveyor from the Ordo Historium Historia happened across Nev's world and rescued him.

    Construction - 0
    Growing - *Still Disabled*
    Research - *Still Disabled*
    Mining - *Still Disabled*
    Shooting - 0
    Melee - +4
    Social - 0
    Cooking - 0
    Medicine - +2
    Artistic - 0
    Crafting - +2

Total for skill offsets:

    Construction - 0
    Growing - *Disabled*
    Research - *Disabled*
    Mining - *Disabled*
    Shooting - 0
    Melee - +4
    Social - +2
    Cooking - + 2
    Medicine - +2
    Artistic - 0
    Crafting - +2

Well, there's my first go at it. Any thoughts on anything I should change/tweak? Feedback is appreciated! I also realize that I am somewhat over the limit for words. Any suggestions for shortening?

[Tynan]

Well-written! I like it!

One detail, it's Ordo Historia (so far, at least).

[Chozo Nomad]

Well-written! I like it!

One detail, it's Ordo Historia (so far, at least).

Thanks! Glad you like it.

(Fixed that one bit. Oops)